WITH THESE SEVEN QUESTIONS
Read the sentence.
Diego shook his head when he saw the litter on the ground.
Which revision should the writer make to emphasize how Diego was feeling?
Diego shook his head when he saw the empty cans and paper on the ground.
Diego shook his head when he saw the litter on the ground, and he quickly began picking it up.
Diego shook his head when he saw the litter on the ground at the public park.
Diego shook his head in disgust and disbelief when he saw the litter on the ground.