Using your Scoring Guide and the unpacked EA prompt as a guide, write a paragraph identifying the characteristics
of an exemplary response to the Embedded Assessment. Use evidence from the exemplar essay and the language
of the scoring guide to support your response. Your paragraph should include (CFS):
An assertion that identifies the characteristics of an exemplary essay
• Direct quotes from the scoring guide and the exemplar essay
Analysis that explains how the examples from the exemplar illustrate the characteristics of and exemplary
response on the scoring guide
A concluding sentence that connects the Embedded Assessment to the thematic and learning focus for the
module
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