The writer is considering deleting sentence 18 (reproduced below).

The Question: The writer is considering deleting sentence 18 (reproduced below).
According to travel writer Hazel Plush in an article in the Telegraph, approximately 32 million tourists visited Barcelona in 2016.
Should the writer keep or delete sentence 18?

Answer: Delete it, because the information it provides from a source is not relevant to the passage’s main idea about Barcelona’s Gothic Quarter.

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