rewrite or rephrase a bad example of a poem:
People were in awe of me, for I was wonderfully qualified in all blessings
For I was the wealthiest, and well dressed
For I was admirable and graceful in every way
I was all that people aspire to be
But why did I feel ungrateful on the inside?
But why did I have the feeling that something was missing?
Why didn’t I have anyone for me like everyone else in town did?
so, I observed the townspeople as they went about their daily lives
hoping, to meet someone for me
but on a quiet summer evening,
I’ve never felt so alone in my life.