Read the following excerpt and respond:
1. “Where do you live? she asked.
2. There, I said pointing up to the third floor.
3. You live there?
4. There. I had to look to where she pointed- the third floor. Papa had nailed on the windows so we wouldn’t fall out. You live there? The way she said it made me feel like nothing.”
Which of the following is the best revision that adds sensory details to the sentence:
Group of answer choices
Line 2: Add “I like the number 2!”
Line 3: Add “I did not want to reveal where I lived”.
Line 4: Add “The paint was peeling and it had wooden bars. ”
Line 4: Add, “I now amounted to a big fat