4. Which sentence was revised to make its language more precise?
Ana had long, dark hair.
Her dark hair was very long.
Ana’s black ponytail hung to her waist.
She had long, dark hair.
4. Which sentence was revised to make its language more precise?
Ana had long, dark hair.
Her dark hair was very long.
Ana’s black ponytail hung to her waist.
She had long, dark hair.