(1) Hiring Jane for a position in your restaurant is an awesome decision for you.
(2) With her superior organizational skills, ability to relate to others, and general sense of responsibility, Jane is an ideal candidate for this position.
(3) As her previous employer, I have often seen her take personal responsibility for solving problems – even those caused by others.
(4) Furthermore, customers frequently praised her for making a great effort to ensure that they had a positive experience.
(5) Hiring Jane will prove to be a decision nobody will regret. Which option best revises this paragraph to maintain a formal tone throughout?
A. Replace sentence 1 with: Hiring Jane for a position in your restaurant is a wise decision that will prove beneficial to all.
B. Replace sentence 4 with: Furthermore, she was frequently praised by customers for making a great effort to ensure that a positive experience was had.
C. Replace sentence 2 with: With her superior organizational skills, ability to relate to others, and general sense of responsibility, she’ll be totally great.
D. Replace sentence 3 with: As her previous employer, I have often seen her take personal answerability for deciphering quagmires – even those resulting from the actions of negligent colleagues